Eris laughed cruelly "You're a fool, Dusk Shine, Solaris didn't choose you to be his apprentice because you had power, but because he knew you would heed his every beck and call." she sneered "No, that's not true, it can't be true!" Protested the lavender stallion "Isn't it? Tell me, how many times have Solaris used you as a pawn in his little games? Pitted you in situations where you could get hurt? Where you could fail? Like with his dear brother, Nighterror Knight." "His name is Prince Artemis!" yelled Dusk Shine "Whatever his name is, don't you think that he could easily have beaten him? Spending a thousand years stuck on the moon is enough to atrophy even the magic of an alicorn, while he had an extra thousand years to prepare and practice for that moment, yet, instead of doing that and making sure Equestria was safe, he let himself get banished to the Sun and sent his precious little Dusk Shine to face a mad god whose plan meant that if you failed, all of ponykind would cease to exist, still don't think you're a pawn in his little chess game?" Eris sneered, seeing the fire in Dusk Shine's eyes slowly extinguish itself "No." whispered the horrified stallion.
kashe: *uses a shadow clone to keep from the mind game that bleaches color* kashe's shadow clone: alright so far looks clear *chases what looks like her cutie mark which right now looks like a scroll with some type of energy around it* where is this thing going real kashe: *hiding out of sight and trying to be out of eris's hearing range*
I could take a story idea off your hands ! (well, not really a book diva, but you get my drift) Me and my brother read and write in our spare time (along with exersise, draw, and think up KotOR mod ideas in my case), and I've thought about doing a MLP: FiM fanfic, so if you want a ghost writer , or just some tips,just ask (or I could refer you to some other writers to bounce an idea off).